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Thursday, March 29, 2007

Effects of going on a diet

Because people's values of beauty have changed, most people think being thin is more beautiful then being fat. There are many people who start to want to become thin, maybe like skinny models. Therefore, they are going on a diet. There are many ways for diet on the street stalls. Diet will let you become thin and good body shape, but it will also cause many side effects for your body and health. First, if you use extreme methods, your blood sugar becomes lower. Therefore, you will be listless and lazy. When you work dispiritedly, you will face troubles, finally, your boss will fire you. Regarding your skin and muscle, it will slacken and be no sheen caused by malnutrition. Second, if you diet by taking medicine, that will make your kidney injured. The most tragic result is death. The wrong dieting leads to unhealthy body. As mentioned above, I think the best way to keep yourslef in good shape is exercise.

1 Comments:

  • At 11:10 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said…

    Because people's values of appreciation of beauty has changed, most people think the thin is more beautiful then the fat.
    -->...values of beauty have...
    -->being thin is more beautiful than being fat.


    There are many people start to want to become thin, maybe like skiny models.
    -->There are many people who start to...
    -->skiny-->skinny



    Therefore, they are going to diet.
    -->going on a diet

    diet:
    http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=21620&dict=CALD

    There are many ways for diet on the street stalls.
    -->street stalls?



    Diet will let you become thin and good body shape, but it will also cause many side effects for your body and health.
    -->good!
    -->An unhealthy diet may...keep you in good shape, ...



    First, if you diet by the strongly way, that will make your blood sugar becomes lower.
    -->if you use extreme methods, your...

    Therefore, you will be listless and no energy.
    --->no energy (rephrase this part)

    When you work with dispiritedly, you will face troubles, finally, your boss will fire you.
    -->delete 'with'


    Second, if you diet by taking medicine, that will make your kidney breaks.
    -->breaks! (injured)

    As a result of the most tragic is death.
    -->The most tragic result is death.


    The wrong diet way leads to unhealthy body. As the above mentioned, I think the best way to diet is exercise.
    -->The wrong dieting leads to...
    -->As mentioned above, ...to keep yourslef in good shape (stay in shape) is...

     

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