My First Campfire Party
Since I joined boy scouts, I went to the campfire party at the end of a year during my high school life. Because we were also boy scouts, we had to did something for the party, like dance, acting or other performance. First, we held hands and sit in a circle around the place where the campfire will be set up. we were quiet as a circle. Then some people who had to dance for a Fire God, asked the God to give us the kindling. It is a ceremony. We waited the fire to be lighted by a leader. After the fire was be lighted, the host will lead everybody to follow his actions and get ready to dacne, duck dance and campfire dance. Then the beginning dance for making high.
After that, the host came out and led a small game for connecting activities of the party schedule. We were actors for the party and performed a TV show or a short play. Then the host came out again and did the same thing as before. Turned to the guests, they led a group dancing. Finally, the leader said something, like thanks everyone for coming to the campfire party. The end was be very satisfactory.
After that, the host came out and led a small game for connecting activities of the party schedule. We were actors for the party and performed a TV show or a short play. Then the host came out again and did the same thing as before. Turned to the guests, they led a group dancing. Finally, the leader said something, like thanks everyone for coming to the campfire party. The end was be very satisfactory.

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At 7:05 AM,
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Since I joined boy scouts, I went to the campfire party at the end of a year during my high school life.
since: from a particular time in the past until a later time, or until now
-->Since + (some time in the past) + someone has (not)been doing something several times.
--> Campfire was the big event at the end... for boy scouts...
First, we led by the hand and surrounded the site to the place where is Campfire Party.
-->led by the hand? held hands?
-->sit in a circle around the place where the campfire will be set up.
we were quiet and surrounded as a circle.
-->delete 'and surround....'
the host will lead everybody to follow his actions and ready to dacne
-->get ready to...
Then the beginning dance for making high.
-->??
After that, the host came out and led a small game for connection the party schedule.
--> for connecting events/activities of the ...
Turned to the guests, they led a group dancing.
-->?
Finally, the leader said something, like thanks everyone who coming the campfire party. The end was be very satisfactory
-->thanks everyone for coming to ...
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